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Thursday, April 8, 2010

"Checkouts" -- REWRITE OF THE ENDING

Jessie was so nervous he just decided to give up and not say anything. The girl Gabrielle thought about him all the way home, and that constant repeat of the mayo falling on the floor she thought to herself how cute. They both were so confused they just forgot about each other for few days.

Later on in the week Gabrielle’s mother needed some sugar so she went back to the store only being clueless about her one and only love. She walked in saw him and almost fainted, at least that’s what she wanted to happen. She didn’t realize that he would be there every time she walked into the store; he would be standing there putting those groceries in the bags. Gabby knew she wanted to say something so she perpously got into his line of bagging. She soon got to his line and had worked up enough guts to ask him out. She stood there and she said,” Uhh, your shoe is untied”. Why would she do that after all the courage she had worked up on? After all of this happened she realized how stupid she felt when she got in that car.

Jessie knew he just couldn’t live without her so soon after she left the store he decided that he would follow them in his blue and white Charger. He found out where she lived and the next day he made planes to knock on her door and ask her out. He got up the next morning ready to feast his eyes on his prize that he wanted since he seen her. He got to the house knocked on the door and there she was, this beautiful young lady with red hair, green eyes, tanned skin, body of a goddess, voice of a fairy, and standing 5’9.

She said, “Hello, realizing it was him, “How can I help you”

He says, “Hi, I’m Jessie from the g-g-rocery”, stuttering and sweating,”I just wanted to ask you did you want to go out with me.

She was so happy but she kept her cool and said, “Sure, I’ll go out with you”

They set the date for Friday June 10. He picked her up and the date started on a great note. Both of them were nervous at first but then got a little comfortable after the got to know each other a little. They had gotten to the movie and it was going great. They were holding hands like that had known each other for ever. They went out to eat at the Goon Lagoon. They were talking about everything and then went home. He let her out the car and walked her to the door he wanted to kiss her so bad but him being a gentleman, he gave her a hug and said goodnight.

For the next three months they went out and got closer to each other every day. Al was well until the relationship made a turn for the worst. Jessie wasn’t feeling Gabby like he was from the start. She started to get annoying and stuck to him. He couldn’t go anywhere without her having to be there or show up. He told her one day that she was getting a little too attached to him. She was so offended she said the most horrible things, slapped him, broke up with him, and ran home. She had never been hurt so badly in her life.

She mourned about it for a long time and would not come out of her room unless she had to eat dinner. Al the while she mourning she made up an awesome plan to make him jealous. She saw this handsome young man that everyone loved to see coming. He would walk by her house everyday around 3:00 p.m. so one day she decided to ask him could he help her plot to make her ex jealous. The day arrived and Gabby so anxious when she got there she was the one to end up getting jealous. Jessie was standing there hugging a girl and about to kiss her. Gabby yelled out,” You fool I hate you” with fire on her breath,”We just broke up two weeks ago and you go and this I can’t believe you”. Jessie stood there with the dumbest look on his face. He thought to himself this chick is really crazy. He followed her to her car and tried to talk to her but she just wouldn’t budge.

She was yelling and screaming saying, “I love you so much but you pushed me away".

“I love you too Gabby but you kept acting crazy like you couldn’t leave me alone.”

She looked at him like he was crazy and just cried. She knew she was acting crazy but it was on because she didn’t want anyone else to have him. All the while she didn’t know she was pushing him away. Jessie was so happy that Gabby noticed her faults and decided to take her back.

In the end it all came to the decision of getting back together and working things out. Gabby never really got over the idea of being attached, but she did try her best. As they got older they got married and had 5 children. They grew older but Gabby died first from OCD. She was always obsessing over the small things. Jessie was happy because she was still crazy and stalker like even after they got married. Some of her children were happy she died because he was crazy then and she was crazy before she died. Jessie just got him another woman and lived with her until they both died.

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